April_Rose
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charlie poemTroubled -
Family comes first, always.
Difficult -
They don't always feel the same.
Devious -
A brother who wants to live the high life
Devoted -
Charlie follows in his footsteps
Mistakes -
Made and never forgotten
A haze -
the world turns and he feels it spinning
Spiraling -
His life goes out of control
Betrayal -
The sale of the piano cuts him deeply.
Trying -
To build his life up from scratch
Impossible -
Addiction has taken him over
Falling -
From the sky to a magical island
Temptations -
lie all around
A mentor -
Locke uses the metaphor of the moth
Trials -
Charlie comes good.
Beauty -
Charlie sees the woman of his dreams
Horror -
She is stolen from him and he's bereft
Difficulties -
the island tests him many times
Determination -
Chaarlie will come through
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Admin1
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Wow, u r 1 talented writer  good work april_rose
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Guest
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Really good.
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April_Rose
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why thank you *takes bow* I liek trying to get into the characters and tlel things from their point of view.
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angelfairy
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thats really good april_rose keep up the good work 
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April_Rose
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thank you *bows* *blushes*
I haven't done any now for a few days but I think i will again soon, will let you all know when i post something new
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Sw21
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Wow, that's a really good poem! Thanks a lot for sharing it, I enjoyed it!
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